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In a half-shaded street

In a half-shaded street
sunlight draws a line on the pebble stones
Wait for the green crossing light
you on the south end in the shadow
me on the north end in the light
Impatiently, our eyes scan the street
and greet
where light and shadow meet
Fulfilling our initial wish, the crossing light turns green
Hesitantly, I start walking into the growing shadow
and you into the dying light

Nunoftferreira - Well composed and interesting piece of poetry you have crafted and shared with a very good flow14 days ago

最后两句很棒啊，貌似背道而驰，其实殊途同归。
这个诗歌网站叫什么？上面的诗友都很友好哦，也对诗歌很有热爱和想法。不知道国内有没有诗歌论坛，还有多少热爱诗歌的文学爱好者。

谢谢，是 allpoetry.com ，一般是都比较 nice ，国内微信里这样的多得是，气氛不一样，我的感觉