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#1 Your Breath

发表于 : 2025年 7月 3日 11:10
Nola1998
Your Breath

Your breath melts into mine in the silver-dark hush
pulling me deeper into the heat of you
Along your skin, I trace constellations
their stars burning beneath my lips —
converged into your dimples of Venus
I drink the blend of your whispered secrets
Taste the tannins of your longing
Immersed in the sweetness of your moaning

#2 Re: Your Breath

发表于 : 2025年 7月 3日 13:45
wh
Nola1998 写了: 昨天 11:10 Your Breath

Your breath melts into mine in the silver-dark hush
pulling me deeper into the heat of you
Along your skin, I trace constellations
their stars burning beneath my lips —
converged into your dimples of Venus
I drink the blend of your whispered secrets
Taste the tannins of your longing
Immersed in the sweetness of your moaning
这首也很sensual,写得很美 :D
为啥是constellations,是对应venus?
查到tannins是鞣酸,这个好学术,没看明白是咋回事…… :D

#3 Re: Your Breath

发表于 : 2025年 7月 3日 21:04
Nola1998
wh 写了: 昨天 13:45 这首也很sensual,写得很美 :D
为啥是constellations,是对应venus?
查到tannins是鞣酸,这个好学术,没看明白是咋回事…… :D
谢谢,是不是做到了情而不色?

看来你不喝葡萄酒