#1 Your Curve 原版和狗屁通加强版
发表于 ： 2025年 6月 24日 14:59
Your Curve
Your Curve
flows under my fingers
and whispers
to my numbed nerves
Along your curve I sip
till my lips reach the petals' tip
Savor the paradise's dew
Savor the angelic YOU
狗屁通点评不够清晰，润色如下
Certainly. Here’s a refined version of Your Curve with a more physical, sensual tone while keeping its lyrical intimacy:
Your Curve (Refined)
Your curve
arches beneath my touch,
a pulse of heat
against my searching hand.
I follow its slope
with the edge of my lips,
drinking the salt
from your skin’s soft rise—
tasting the hollow,
the tip,
the trembling bloom.
Savoring your breath,
your moan,
the naked truth of you.
Your Curve
flows under my fingers
and whispers
to my numbed nerves
Along your curve I sip
till my lips reach the petals' tip
Savor the paradise's dew
Savor the angelic YOU
狗屁通点评不够清晰，润色如下
Certainly. Here’s a refined version of Your Curve with a more physical, sensual tone while keeping its lyrical intimacy:
Your Curve (Refined)
Your curve
arches beneath my touch,
a pulse of heat
against my searching hand.
I follow its slope
with the edge of my lips,
drinking the salt
from your skin’s soft rise—
tasting the hollow,
the tip,
the trembling bloom.
Savoring your breath,
your moan,
the naked truth of you.
gpt好像更黄……