To Anna

[Nola1998]

To Anna

Your laughter drapes my skin like riesling
Its taste lingering and tantalizing
In the amber hush, your silhouette sways—
hips wave and coat our night with glaze

Between heartbeats, your whispers ignite
a blaze waiting to be quenched by you
Dear Anna, my rainbow in gentle light
my fountain of mellow hues

[wh]

To Anna

Your laughter drapes my skin like riesling
Its taste lingering and tantalizing
In the amber hush, your silhouette sways—
hips wave and coat our night with glaze

Between heartbeats, your whispers ignite
a blaze waiting to be quenched by you
Dear Anna, my rainbow in gentle light
my fountain of mellow hues

很美，不过我看得有点迷糊 amber hush是啥……hips coat our night with glaze是不是倒装啊，是night coats your hips with glaze?
看到heartbeat，想起你以前贴的AI文章里有心跳漏了一拍，今天youhi贴的AI小色文里也有，AI写这句很拿手

[Nola1998]

被你一问，感觉写的有些狗屁不通了，哈哈哈。

heartbeat 确实 cliche，小色文，那我赶紧去学习一下。